Hi there everybody, this is my first race, after 1 year working on wcs, learning wcs scripting.
My first work, if you dont like it tell me, if something wrong tell me.
This is the race:

GeSHi (eventscripts):
  {
    "name"              "Divine Killer"
    "author"            "[AoD]DGN"
    "shortdescription"  "First Race =D"
    "required_level"    "0"
    "maximum_level"     "0"
    "allow_only"        "0"
    "teamlimit"         "0"
    "restrict_shop"     "0"
    "preloadcmd"        "0"
    "player_spawn_cmd"  "0"
    "round_start_cmd"   "0"
    "round_end_cmd"     "0"
    "numberofskills"    "4"
    "numberoflevels"    "6"
    "skillnames"        "Divine Health|Hell Damage|Cape of Invisibility|Death Sparks"
    "skilldescr"        "Extra life|+Damage|Invisibility|50% chance to damage nearby enemies with Death Sparks"
    "skillcfg"          "player_spawn|player_attacker|player_spawn|player_ultimate"
 
    "skill1_setting"    "es_xsetinfo wcs_addhealt 50;es_xset wcs_alpha 50|es_xset wcs_addhealt 60;es_xset wcs_alpha 60|es_xset wcs_addhealt 70;es_xset wcs_alpha 70|es_xset wcs_addhealt 80;es_xset wcs_alpha 80"
    "skill1_cmd"        "es est_health event_var(userid) + server_var(wcs_addhealt);wcs_getlanguage wcs_lng wcs_lng_r_devotion;es_tell event_var(userid)#multi server_var(wcs_lng)"
    "skill1_sfx"        "es_getplayerlocation wcs_x1 wcs_y1 wcs_z1 event_var(userid);es_getplayerlocation wcs_x2 wcs_y2 wcs_z2 event_var(userid);es_xmath wcs_z2 + 150;es est_effect 3 #a 0 sprites/lgtning.vmt server_var(wcs_x1) server_var(wcs_y1) server_var(wcs_z1) server_var(wcs_x2) server_var(wcs_y2) server_var(wcs_z2) 2 40 10 200 255 205 255"
 
    "skill2_setting"    "es_xset wcs_multiplier 1.3|es_xset wcs_multiplier 1.6|es_xset wcs_multiplier 1.9|es_xset wcs_multiplier 2.1|es_xset wcs_multiplier 2.4"
    "racealias_kd"      "es_set wcs_dmg event_var(dmg_health);es_xmath wcs_dmg float;es_math wcs_dmg * server_var(wcs_multiplier);es est_RoundDecimal wcs_dmg server_var(wcs_dmg) 0;es_wcs_dealdamage event_var(attacker) event_var(userid) server_var(wcs_dmg);wcs_getlanguage wcs_lng wcs_lng_damage;esnq est_csay event_var(attacker) + server_var(wcs_dmg) server_var(wcs_lng);esnq est_csay event_var(userid) + server_var(wcs_dmg) server_var(wcs_lng);racealias_ddksfx"
    "racealias_ddksfx"  "es_getplayerlocation wcs_x1 wcs_y1 wcs_z1 event_var(userid);es_getplayerlocation wcs_x2 wcs_y2 wcs_z2 event_var(attacker);es est_effect 6 #a 0 sprites/fireburst.vmt server_var(wcs_x1) server_var(wcs_y1) server_var(wcs_z1) server_var(wcs_x2) server_var(wcs_y2) server_var(wcs_z2) 400 1 10 255 51 0 255"
    "skill2_cmd"        "if(server)var(wcs_dice)<=25 then racealias_kd"                                                                                                                                                                                                                 
    "skill2_sfx"        "0"
 
    "skill3_setting"    "es_xset wcs_invis 150;es_xset wcs_alpha 50|es_xset wcs_invis 140;es_xset wcs_alpha 60|es_xset wcs_invis 130;es_xset wcs_alpha 70|es_xset wcs_invis 120;es_xset wcs_alpha 80|es_xset wcs_invis 110;es_xset wcs_alpha 90|es_xset wcs_invis 100;es_xset wcs_alpha 100|es_xset wcs_invis 90;es_xset wcs_alpha 110|es_xset wcs_invis 80;es_xset wcs_alpha 120"       
    "skill3_cmd"        "es_xcopy wcs_tmp wcs_invis;es_xmath wcs_tmp float;es_xmath wcs_tmp / -2.55;es_xmath wcs_tmp + 100;es est_rounddecimal wcs_tmp server_var(wcs_tmp) 0;es_keysetvalue WCSuserdata event_var(userid) invisp server_var(wcs_tmp);es est_playercolor event_var(userid) 255 255 255 server_var(wcs_invis)1;wcs_getlanguage wcs_lng wcs_lng_r_invis;es_tell event_var(userid) #multi server_var(wcs_lng)"
    "skill3_sfx"        "es_getplayerlocation wcs_x1 wcs_y1 wcs_z1 event_var(userid);es_xmath wcs_z1 + 20;es est_effect 10 #a 0 sprites/lgtning.vmt server_var(wcs_x1) server_var(wcs_y1)server_var(wcs_z1) 30 60 2 10 0 0 0 255 50 128 10"
 
    "skill4_setting"    "es_xsetinfo wcs_chance 25;es_xsetinfo wcs_radius 500|es_xsetinfo wcs_chance 30;es_xsetinfo wcs_radius 600|es_xsetinfo wcs_chance 35;es_xsetinfo wcs_radius 700|es_xsetinfo wcs_chance 40;es_xsetinfo wcs_radius 800|es_xsetinfo wcs_chance 50;es_xsetinfo wcs_radius 900"
    "skill4_cmd"        "if(server_var(wcs_dice) <= server_var(wcs_chance)) then es_xdoblock wcs/WCSultimates/spark_divine;if (server_var(wcs_dice) > server_var(wcs_chance)) then es_xtell server_var(wcs_userid) #multi #green SPARKS FAILED!!"
    "skill4_sfx"        "0"
    "ultimate_cooldown" "30"
  }

And this is the ultimate block:

GeSHi (eventscripts):
block spark_divine
{
  es_fire event_var(userid) env_spark
  es_give event_var(userid) env_spark
  es_fire event_var(userid) env_spark addoutput "Magnitude 2"
  es_fire event_var(userid) env_spark addoutput "TrailLength 3"
  es_fire event_var(userid) env_spark addoutput "spawnflags 256"
  es_fire event_var(userid) env_spark StartSpark
  es_tell event_var(userid) #multi #lightgreenYou got hit by event_var(es_attackername) Divine Spark
es_tell event_var(attacker) #multi #lightgreenYou hit event_var(es_username) with the Divine Sparks
ifx true(wcsgraphicfx) do
{
es_getplayerlocation wcs_x1 wcs_y1 wcs_z1 event_var(userid)
es_getplayerlocation wcs_x2 wcs_y2 wcs_z2 event_var(attacker)
es est_effect 8 #a 0 sprites/bluespark.vmt server_var(wcs_x1) server_var(wcs_y1) server_var(wcs_z1) server_var(wcs_x2) server_var(wcs_y2) server_var(wcs_z2)
}
}
 

And dont forget to name the ultimate block spark_divine!!!
I Fixed all the errors and modified the post =D
Ultimate Tested working perfectly...
Hope you like

You mean no wcs_chance on ultimates?
or for this is not necessary?

i would look over the coding but oddity already said it looked fine, so im going to have to agree, but being a server owner, meaning im constantly looking for more races that are interesting, this is pretty basic and common. its well put together and you actually put the time into thinking of unique names but theres already a lot of similar ideas. maybe on your next race try something out of the ordinary? other than that, it looks good and keep up the good work!

thats what i meant, the basic stuff and common errors.

which is why i didnt flame him and cut him down for it. i thought i was nice about encouraging him to challenge himself next time.

I Modified the post, tested the ultimate and its working, fixed every error of es.

;X Sorry the error, i'll pay attention next time, i didnt know that because i tought that it was 1 command, and we can do it together, but anyway...
Thanks!

Your ultimate cannot work the way it's done

First of all a small mistake, which will just make the sfx won't work : you use es_xgetplayerlocation, which doesn't expand event_vars (like userid and attacker, in our case)... so change it to es_getplayerlocation.
Secondly, a huge mistake which will make whole skill won't work... You didn't understand how ultimates work, and not how events work either.
No event has anything to see with another event. Here you are mixing event player_ultimate, and event player_hurt... although you shouldn't.
In an ultimate, the only player you may talk about is server_var(wcs_userid), which is the player using the ultimate.
In a player_victim or player_attacker skill (which both are using event player_hurt), you may use event_var(userid) and event_var(attacker).
But in an ultimate, there is no event_var(attacker) and event_var(userid)
Thirdly, another small mistake, env_spark doesn't deal damage, so if you want to deal damage within X range, use est_near.

1. Berett made good point, since your getlocation puts values in a variable but doesn't use a number it is getting the location of another variabvle it needs expanding which can be done two ways one is by removing the X in es_Xget  or by putting an ES infront of it  es es_xget. I prefer adding ES although it is the older way and the people using newer way claim it is faster, I find a few personal reasons to keep using ES.

2. He is also right about using event_var in ultimate. You can reference the player_hurt block or use est_near or some other common way and gather the other userids but you have to manual assign them to something like wcs_targetid or whatever.